I had to watch it twice to get it. I think the main problem for me is: why does the coupon for the free guitar exist, if the shop owner isn't going to redeem it legitimately? Did it come from somewhere else? Or did he just not want to give away his last guitar? Also, why would he be giving away free guitars anyway? Just some things that bothered me. I think if you think it out a little more you should be able to fix it. I'm in second year, by the way.
took me while to figure out what the coupon was for... I feel you had too many close up on the face, maybe you shoulda had a close up on the ticket rather, to stablish what it is, and I guess also feels like too many close ups on the store owner's face too.
So for the ending....ummmm is he like in a guitar town? sorta confused there...
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I had to watch it twice to get it. I think the main problem for me is: why does the coupon for the free guitar exist, if the shop owner isn't going to redeem it legitimately? Did it come from somewhere else? Or did he just not want to give away his last guitar? Also, why would he be giving away free guitars anyway? Just some things that bothered me. I think if you think it out a little more you should be able to fix it. I'm in second year, by the way.
took me while to figure out what the coupon was for... I feel you had too many close up on the face, maybe you shoulda had a close up on the ticket rather, to stablish what it is, and I guess also feels like too many close ups on the store owner's face too.
So for the ending....ummmm is he like in a guitar town? sorta confused there...
You spelled "leica" rong.
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